Insensible Loss

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by Paul Michael Peters

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Would you drink from the Fountain of Youth if it meant becoming someone else’s obsession—forever? In 1839, somewhere in the heart of the Yucatán, a discovery is made—not gold, not glory, but something far more dangerous: a liquid that stops time. For Viktor Erikson, a sailor seeking purpose, and Morgana de la Motte, the brilliant daughter of a famed scientist, it’s the beginning of something eternal. But eternity is not freedom. It’s repetition. Reinvention. Control. Across decades and disguises, Viktor and Morgana live, die, and live again—sometimes as lovers, sometimes as strangers, sometimes as parent and child. And always bound by the elixir that first saved them… then broke them. By 2053, Viktor is dying—finally. In a quiet hospice, nurse Olivia reads his journals, uncovering a tale too strange to believe, too tragic to forget. As she becomes entangled in the legacy of two souls trapped by time, Morgana returns, untouched by age, bearing one last secret—and one final choice. Spanning over two centuries, Insensible Loss is a psychological science fiction novel about love stretched thin by immortality, and identity unraveling beneath the weight of memory. For fans of The Time Traveler’s Wife , Never Let Me Go , and The Fountain , this is a story of obsession disguised as devotion—and the cost of never letting go. "The Weight of Time, the Wreckage of Want" Review of Paul Michael Peters' Insensible Loss Paul Michael Peters' Insensible Loss reads like a memory unearthed too late—haunting, bruised, and exquisitely unforgiving. It is not a novel that begs for attention with fireworks or twisty plotting. Rather, it seeps into your consciousness like a half-remembered dream and lingers there, stubborn and tender. The premise: immortality via an elixir discovered in 1839 suggests a speculative adventure, but Peters delivers something quieter and far more subversive. What unfolds is not a celebration of eternal youth, but an autopsy of it. Viktor Erikson and Morgana de la Motte, bound across centuries by the Fountain's power, are lovers, rivals, and occasionally each other's captors. Their love is as much a manipulation of time as it is of emotion, reconfiguring again and again like a music box stuck in a loop. Peters' prose is restrained, but never dull. His greatest strength lies in the spaces between things and the unspoken tensions, the glances across decades, the ghost of choices never made. Olivia, the nurse who finds herself reading Viktor's journal in 2053, anchors the story in something heartbreakingly human. Through her, we glimpse what's at stake: not just the cost of living forever, but the cost of living at all. This is not a novel for those seeking resolution. Insensible Loss thrives on ambiguity, on the blurred line between care and control, rebirth and possession, memory and myth. There are moments when its own restraint threatens to become inertia, but just as the tension slackens, Peters delivers a line or image that cuts through like glass. If Kazuo Ishiguro, Audrey Niffenegger, and David Mitchell ever walked into a time-bent café and shared a melancholy dream, Insensible Loss might be what they'd wake up holding. It is a novel of echoes. Of losses that accumulate like sediment. And of love that forgets how to let go. ★★★★☆ (4/5) A slow burn with long shadows. Elegant, sorrowful, and entirely original. "What if you found the fountain of youth, and it didn't keep you young, but made you young? That was the first question that came to mind. Next, if you were young, say a baby, how would you grow old without some one else?I guess the one question starts to pose other questions. How much trust would you have in that other person to care for you? It would have to be total trust and confidence to take turns rising one another after drinking from the fountain of youth.If you did it for love, but the one you love is not a good person... well there were lots of possibilities in a story like that. How do you choose the best story from those rules, that is the question. That is what I tried to provide the reader. Something fun, exciting, romantic, and dramatic. I tried to write something my mom would enjoy, like Flash Gordon with Buster Crab, or Indian Jones with Harrison Ford. Fun, exciting, and a little bit dark."  Top-selling author Paul Michael Peters is an American writer best known for his take on the quirky tangents and morals of contemporary life and his recent novel, Insensible Loss. His upcoming novel, Combustible Punch, is a thriller scheduled for release in 2019 that explores the psychological dance between that most unlikely of odd couples: a serial killer and a high school shooting survivor. Stay up to date with Peters' latest book releases and author news by visiting his website, where you can sign up for the newsletter as well as find more short stories and other online content.

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